The was a boy called david he was worried about his school report. When david got home he thought that his mother will get angry about his report.Then his mother came upstaires. When his mother came to his bedroom she saw david.She asked david "are you all right?" said his mother.Yes said david quietly.And she went downstaires. Then his father called him and he said"come downstaires david come down".Then david went very ,very slowy downstaries he went.After that david asked his dad can I see the report please said david.Then his father said Yes. And david looked at the report. and this is what it said.
School report:
Maths:Very good work.
Reading:David s reading is along very well
Spelling:Excellent.
Science:David likes science.He works hard.
Sports:David is the best runner in class.
David is very helpful in class and always
tries his best. well done.
He was not worried anymore.
I love that story.
Brawin,seven 7
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Brawin. Thank you for writing your book review. I am looking forward to reading a lot more of your book reviews.
Now try and write a little bit more of your own opinion on the stories you read.
Mrs O'Driscoll
Brawin, as promised but a little bit late, here is my comment:
This is a great book review, I like the way you shared lots of important details from the story with the blog readers. In your next review try writing about what the story book made you think about. When I read this review it reminded me of when I was a bit naughty at school, and how worried I was when my Mum went to see my teacher. But just like David I did get a good report. Keep on Blogging young man!
To brawin i liked your book reveiw it was funny.
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